Don't Speak
Oct. 24th, 2011 10:06 pmMod(s), there is no notice for fanfiction or the like but I hope I've properly labled. It's my first fanfiction for the show. And it is dark and rated R, so keep that in mind. If you'd like to delete it, please feel free and let me know.
Don't Speak
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Note: I do not own “Once Upon A Time” and I do not make a profit from writing this story. I’m just amusing myself.
Rating: R (Frank mentions of sex, language)
Genre: Angst/DARK
Prompt: Humiliation (dark_bingo)
Word Count: 565
Pairing: Ruby/Mr. Gold, Red Riding Hood/Rumplestiltskin
Summary: The power of a name thrilled him and nothing was better than when she screamed his.
Ruby knew she should be very offended when Granny called her a slut, but unfortunately she couldn’t deny it. She couldn’t help it, she had been on the good path for so long when she realized what she was missing, and she could never go back. She didn’t want to go back, even if the brand of ‘whore’ humiliated her, a part of her didn’t care. Even her dreams echoed her life though they were more mystical but oh so erotic. Her favorite. She knew she should be disgusted, especially when she would make her nightly rounds that would end with Mr. Gold.
Most times it was near dawn by the time she saw him, he would be on her the moment she walked in. Her red scarf would fly to the floor, most times he’d rip straight through her blouse and his mouth would be on her neck. God she wanted to hate it, but he was so damn good she was aching for him by the time they would find somewhere to fuck. Some days they couldn’t even make it to the bedroom. And she should feel humiliated for being taken on the floor…a table…against the wall but she didn’t. It only excited her.
He was always careful not to damage her fragile red lingerie, especially since he gifted her with it. She loved his gifts, when he was kind enough to give, it was always red, always silk and always something he admired her in. But easy enough it was on the floor and he was inside her. Most of her other fucks were just to hold her over for this, he would growl as her high heels would dig into his back and she would laugh. She knew he loved it, she couldn’t understand this attraction to him but as he would move over her with powerful strokes she couldn’t think of anyone else to be with.
She wasn’t able to speak; she was only allowed to say his name. No matter how she said it, in a grunt, a whisper, a scream she swore it made him stronger. His grip would get tighter on her wrists, his thrusts quicker and harder and she loved every second of it. When she came screaming his name, he would let out a wicked laugh and after a fierce kiss, and a few more thrusts, he would release.
He would whisper the same words in her ear, a promise that he could eat her up and he with a grin would kick her out. She didn’t mind, she would wrap her red scarf around her and would hurry home. Granny was always asleep when she got in and she was thankful for that. She knew how angry the woman would be if she found out her beloved Granddaughter was fucking the man the whole town hated. She didn’t care, she was too addicted.
He would haunt her, even in her dreams, there was always woods, a red cloak and him pulling her against a tree and fucking her as she screamed his name. When she would wake up and she knew she wasn’t calling him “Gold” but the other name would always elude her. She knew the old saying that you should fear wolves in the forest but she didn’t, she welcome them…in all shapes and sizes. But he would always be her favorite.
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My first stab at "Once Upon A Time" and I will enjoy writing again.
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Date: 2011-10-25 02:16 am (UTC)Seriously though, I really enjoyed that. Dark and hot and interesting. Well done, considering there's only been one episode.
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Date: 2011-10-25 04:06 pm (UTC)And that was some hot sex between her and Mr. Gold/Rumplestilkskin.
I look forward to reading more of your fics.
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