ABC Once Upon A Time

Hi there! I'm not so worried about a grammar edit just yet, that can come later. At the moment I really need someone who knows the show to give me feedback on the actual story content itself. Especially because it was written during Nano I feel like there are some things that are going to need fixing and possibly rewriting. It's actually not quite finished yet but I currently a bit lost on how to end it and what needs to come together so I could use some help brainstorming that. I'm totally willing to listen to constructive criticism and to tear this story apart and rewrite portions if necessary. If that sounds like something you're willing to help me with that would be great! Let me know and I could email you the draft as it stands now to read through and we could go from there?

Thanks!